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PERUVIANMETALMUSIC
Mallcore Kid

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:18 pm 
 

I send a review for a Black Angels's album " Black Angel" 2002,( from Peru ), and it was accepted. That means it followed every rule step by step. Im not talking about a review that was no accepted for some reason. This review was accepted and it has been in my profile for more than a week. Today I found out that it was somehow deleted. Why is that?. The review was about the music and atmosphere. What did I do wrong?. Please I expect a good and concrete answer, not a nonsense opinion of what you think might have happened.


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Mieresch
Metalhead

Joined: Sat Jan 06, 2007 2:46 pm
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Location: Romania
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 7:31 pm 
 

Yeah...you follow the rules. Just by looking at your reviews, without reading them, i know all of the should be deleted. They are all in one big chunk, and are pretty short. I'm kind of sure that the content isn't the best.

P.S. Don't write in caps, it's annoying to read that....

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JoeCapricorn
Needs to stop pissing off the mods

Joined: Thu Mar 02, 2006 11:36 pm
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Location: United States of America
PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 8:46 pm 
 

PERUVIANMETALMUSIC wrote:
CAPS LOCK RAPE LOLOLOLOLOL


Way to construct an argument there....
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Caliginosity
Philosopher of Metal

Joined: Tue May 15, 2007 5:29 pm
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:04 pm 
 

Probably because they were all written with CAPS LOCK ON.

"Caps lock is cruise control for cool"

Refer to here: http://www.encyclopediadramatica.com/Caps_lock

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PERUVIANMETALMUSIC
Mallcore Kid

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 10:44 pm 
 

If you read my profiles' submmitted reviews then you will see how well written they are. To begin with, my review for Black Angel was accepted, that means it followed the rules. All my reviews explain the music and atmosphere in depth. So Dust666 you better relax, if you are just going to write something that is not helpful or nonsense opinions then just dont write. You are no help at all. All of my reviews are well written and " no review is written all in caps locks". If you want to help, please, read all my reviews first to see that all of then are decent. They are not great at all, but are decent. They were accepted.

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Morrigan
Crone of War

Joined: Sat Aug 10, 2002 7:27 am
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 19, 2007 11:39 pm 
 

The review could have been accepted by mistake, actually.

The deleted review in question:

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Pathetic and Boring - 1%

First of all I do not recommend this album to anyone. I’m writing this for your good and for the good of anyone who is interested to purchase this album. It might be the most boring and mediocre album ever recorded in Peru. It is so simple to describe. Play one note and begin to scream “Satan this …Satan that... bla, blah blahh” fror ten seconds. Play a second note and scream. Play the first note again with no screaming. Repeat the process again six times. Intersted? I don’t think you are. This is not the everyday black metal band from Peru. Peru has good black metal such as Goat Semen, Anal Vomit, Adogma, Hastur, Ayahuaira, Eternal, Belzec, Akeldam, etc. Black Angel is one bad, but really bad exception.
The album is not only bad music-wise. The recording is terrible. The sound recording changes dramatically by music. For example in the song Harlots of Satan there is a good recording, but then the following song “Corpus” sounds like if it was recorded by a cheap and old little toy microphone. Black Magic Arts sounds like if it was taken from an old tape, which is not all, the music is so bad and bad recorded that this album sounds as a horrible and bad punk crust album. I can’t describe by my own words how sad and pathetic this album is. All the songs have the same structure and technique. There is no way I can let anyone to have this album. I will feel responsible if you waste your money in this. It is a shame that it came from Peru. No country deserves to have this kind of band.
There is no darkness or any kind of felling transmitted by the music. This album lacks atmosphere. This album lacks musician in the first place. I’m not a Satanist, but I feel sorry for Satan to have stupid followers like Black Angel. I gave it a 1 because I felt sorry for the band.


"How well written they are"... I feel sorry for you.

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Caliginosity
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 12:24 am 
 

:lol: good call morrigan ;)

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PERUVIANMETALMUSIC
Mallcore Kid

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:23 am 
 

I really apreciate your answer. I thought I was not going to be answered.


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PERUVIANMETALMUSIC
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:31 am 
 

Morrigan wrote:
The review could have been accepted by mistake, actually.

The deleted review in question:

Quote:
Pathetic and Boring - 1%

First of all I do not recommend this album to anyone. I’m writing this for your good and for the good of anyone who is interested to purchase this album. It might be the most boring and mediocre album ever recorded in Peru. It is so simple to describe. Play one note and begin to scream “Satan this …Satan that... bla, blah blahh” fror ten seconds. Play a second note and scream. Play the first note again with no screaming. Repeat the process again six times. Intersted? I don’t think you are. This is not the everyday black metal band from Peru. Peru has good black metal such as Goat Semen, Anal Vomit, Adogma, Hastur, Ayahuaira, Eternal, Belzec, Akeldam, etc. Black Angel is one bad, but really bad exception.
The album is not only bad music-wise. The recording is terrible. The sound recording changes dramatically by music. For example in the song Harlots of Satan there is a good recording, but then the following song “Corpus” sounds like if it was recorded by a cheap and old little toy microphone. Black Magic Arts sounds like if it was taken from an old tape, which is not all, the music is so bad and bad recorded that this album sounds as a horrible and bad punk crust album. I can’t describe by my own words how sad and pathetic this album is. All the songs have the same structure and technique. There is no way I can let anyone to have this album. I will feel responsible if you waste your money in this. It is a shame that it came from Peru. No country deserves to have this kind of band.
There is no darkness or any kind of felling transmitted by the music. This album lacks atmosphere. This album lacks musician in the first place. I’m not a Satanist, but I feel sorry for Satan to have stupid followers like Black Angel. I gave it a 1 because I felt sorry for the band.


"How well written they are"... I feel sorry for you.


THANKS INDEED. NOW I UNDERSTAND. Now can I review it again since I know it was a very bad review?. Can you tell me what were my mistakes?. I'm not trying to be a problem here.

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JoeCapricorn
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Joined: Thu Mar 02, 2006 11:36 pm
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:58 am 
 

Hmm...

First of all, I do not recommend this album to anyone. I’m writing this for your good and for the good of anyone who is interested in purchasing this album. It might be the most boring and mediocre album ever recorded in Peru. It is so simple to describe. Play one note and begin to scream “Satan this …Satan that... bla, blah blahh” fror ten seconds. Play a second note and scream. Play the first note again with no screaming. Repeat the process again six times. Intersted? I don’t think you are. This is not the everyday black metal band from Peru. Peru has good black metal such as Goat Semen, Anal Vomit, Adogma, Hastur, Ayahuaira, Eternal, Belzec, Akeldam, etc. Black Angel is one bad, but really bad exception.
The album is not only bad music-wise. The recording is terrible. The sound recording changes dramatically by music. For example in the song Harlots of Satan there is a good recording, but then the following song “Corpus” sounds like if it was recorded by a cheap and old little toy microphone. Black Magic Arts sounds like if it was taken from an old tape, which is not all, the music is so bad and bad recorded that this album sounds as a horrible and bad punk crust album. I can’t describe by my own words how sad and pathetic this album is. All the songs have the same structure and technique. There is no way I can let anyone to have this album. I will feel responsible if you waste your money in this. It is a shame that it came from Peru. No country deserves to have this kind of band.
There is no darkness or any kind of felling transmitted by the music. This album lacks atmosphere. This album lacks musician in the first place. I’m not a Satanist, but I feel sorry for Satan to have stupid followers like Black Angel. I gave it a 1 because I felt sorry for the band.
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JoeCapricorn
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 2:04 am 
 

Do note that the first few mistakes I corrected them. For the rest, you'll have to figure out the correction on your own.

Listen, I know you're transcending language families when you go from Spanish to English, you're going from a Latin based language to a Germanic language, and it can be hard to get everything absolutely right.

But Metal-Archives is an English website, everything must be written in English. This includes all reviews, submissions, etc...

The only thing that isn't in English are the band names. Some names would look completely retarded if they went from their awesome Polish or Russian name to a shitty English name.

Next time, before you submit your review, post it on the Reviews forum. Have people look over your review for grammatical corrections. I did a very quick and simple grammar check, I missed a lot, and I spotted a lot that could've been improved.

But things that you CAN improve are spelling errors and typos. Mozilla Firefox's latest version comes with a built in spell checker. That means every time you type a word incorrectly like tihs or htat or whatnot, it will let you know. It does not have a grammar checker, so if you grammar error make pick up Mozilla will not.
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christkiller
Black Metal Elite

Joined: Sat Jun 07, 2003 5:12 am
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 2:04 am 
 

I deleted it: poorly written + your attempt at destroying this band is pathetic....

I know someone who won't last long here if he doesn't change his behaviour :rolleyes:

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PERUVIANMETALMUSIC
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Thu Jul 12, 2007 3:22 pm
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 4:58 am 
 

christkiller wrote:
I deleted it: poorly written + your attempt at destroying this band is pathetic....

I know someone who won't last long here if he doesn't change his behaviour :rolleyes:


I do not want to destroy this band. The band has a decent underground status already. And isn't that a review for? I reviewed it, my grammar was bad, but I saw what were my misakes. If you want to get me banned just because of my grammar, then do it. Otherwise don't say that I might get banned from here just because " Im destroying a band". Not every album on earth has to be rated "100 %". I know how difficult is for you to run this page., but you have to relax ok?.

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christkiller
Black Metal Elite

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 5:04 am 
 

PERUVIANMETALMUSIC wrote:
christkiller wrote:
I deleted it: poorly written + your attempt at destroying this band is pathetic....

I know someone who won't last long here if he doesn't change his behaviour :rolleyes:


I do not want to destroy this band. The band has a decent underground status already. And isn't that a review for? I reviewed it, my grammar was bad, but I saw what were my misakes. If you want to get me banned just because of my grammar, then do it. Otherwise don't say that I might get banned from here just because " Im destroying a band". Not every album on earth has to be rated "100 %". I know how difficult is for you to run this page., but you have to relax ok?.


I'm relax ;) you've not seen me angry :)

I don't know who accepted your review 1st but he shouldn't have

if you need a coach for reviews => NAPERO

You won't be banned if you respect the rules :)

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oneyoudontknow
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 5:25 am 
 

christkiller wrote:
if you need a coach for reviews => NAPERO

or post the review there:
http://www.metal-archives.com/board/vie ... hp?t=16487
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