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ᴎostalgiʞK
Metal newbie

Joined: Sat Mar 01, 2014 1:27 pm
Posts: 165
Location: Argentina, Brazil
PostPosted: Mon Mar 25, 2019 8:43 pm 
 

I hope I do not bother you, I'm really trying to improve my way to write a review, English is my 3rd language and it is hard to me sometimes.
I didn't know where to ask for help, I read the Review FAQ and the rejection note I got, still I tried to pull out my reviews (which must be awful xd) but I'm trying my best, may I ask here for help? Like, some "follow-up" "points to improve" "A/ should be more -specified, rich in content" "B/ is not a good idea to use" I need a hand, sorry (I know I could write it in Spanish primarily and then translate step-by-step in English) but is really hard when I get there and the words and phrases traduced literally from Spanish to English does not make much sense, sounds easy but.. well haha, I hope someone help me out...
Is there a problem if I post the -attempt-of-review- here so we can see the errors?
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Derigin
The Mountain Man

Joined: Sun Jan 01, 2006 6:25 am
Posts: 5398
Location: Canada
PostPosted: Mon Mar 25, 2019 8:59 pm 
 

Hey man, try offering your review in the workshop. Fellow reviewers would be happy to help you out:
viewtopic.php?f=4&t=16487
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ᴎostalgiʞK
Metal newbie

Joined: Sat Mar 01, 2014 1:27 pm
Posts: 165
Location: Argentina, Brazil
PostPosted: Mon Mar 25, 2019 9:23 pm 
 

Thanks Derigin! :)
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My abandoned projects:
Deathrall : Black Metal
GrindOfKaczka : Grindcore/Powerviolence
OpsiusCato wrote:
It's in my Goatfangs text.file
Hilarious stupid comment that MalconInTheMETAL wrote:
Everyone calls Black Sabbath heavy metal, but by today's standards they aren't at all

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