Hey, I'm posting here, because I really don't know what to change in my review and I don't want to annoy the mods by submitting the same thing twice.

In the e-mail they listed things like not enough paragraph breaks, improper capitalization and typos, but I just don't see it. I have separated all six paragraphs with double enters and the only type I see is my browser not recognizing the word deathcore.

For context, this is what it looks like on my screen: I see literally no mistakes and I haven't edited it yet.

Can someone help? I don't want to submit it again, without changes and annoy the mods.

I'm not the mod who rejected it, but looking over it, that seems fine in terms of grammar. That message you got is a canned one that we use if there's any issue with the grammar or formatting, and really the only issue I see is that final section that is entirely broken off by the line break. I'd remove that and try again (or wait for the rejecting mod to respond here in case there's something else I missed, but that's what stands out to me right now).

Strange, all my other reviews have a line break like that and it's never been a problem.

Aye, just try resubmitting it. Should be fine.