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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 27, 2017 5:47 pm 
 

MOD EDIT: All Slayer1990 posts have been merged into this thread.

This is our first demo do we sound good?
I am the singer in the band

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1k6bNgJ72Li


Last edited by Zodijackyl on Wed Jul 11, 2018 12:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2017 5:02 pm 
 

Hello

I have plans on becoming a black metal singer but i dont know if my voice suits?
What do you think?

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1rz0grr6xaD

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willBburied
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2017 6:33 pm 
 

it suits

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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2017 7:38 pm 
 

thanks

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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 20, 2017 6:40 pm 
 

Hello

I am a singer in an iron maiden/bruce dickinson cover band. We just got finished recording a cover of total eclipse. What do you think?

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0lLAPapjVMU

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Ferneyhough
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2018 1:28 pm 
 

It's suits. And why do ask this kind of question, while you can shriek in time?

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Ebheron
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 28, 2018 6:49 pm 
 

This sounds... really good. You had any doubts? lol
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 13, 2018 5:16 pm 
 

As much as i love the old raw black metal he used to play. Hammerheart and this song will always be one of my favourites.

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1TkcbjCnM3T

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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 10:36 am 
 

Hello

I tried to write a thrash metal riff for my band but i dont know if it works or sounds good. I mean there are alot of riffs that already have been used. What do you think?

https://soundcloud.com/intoinfiniteobsc ... tal-riff-1

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Ebheron
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 4:53 pm 
 

It sounds more like a old school black metal thing for me than a Thrash riff, not that I'm complaining I'm diggin it lol.
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2018 5:56 pm 
 

Hello

I have been practicing on this song with my band. I play guitar and vocals and in one week we will be playing it live. How does it sound?

https://www.smule.com/en/recording/juda ... 2058060103

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panfuza
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2018 1:19 am 
 

It sounds really good man, it's almost like 1st wave black metal but ey there isn't any problem with some blackened thrash.

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Gunslinger21
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 2:05 am 
 

That sounds pretty cool mate. Make a song out of it and post it.

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at the gaytes
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2018 3:49 pm 
 

Nice Imagine cover :thumbsup:

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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2018 8:24 am 
 

Thanks man i tried to sing clean but i dont know if it sounds good. This is me singing a Meatloaf song. I could not find a karaoke track so i made it myself.

https://soundcloud.com/intoinfiniteobsc ... ou-deserve

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Cynical
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2018 11:10 pm 
 

Not sure what's going on with the melodic part of the riff after the gallops, but it sounds "off". Try moving your three-note progressions in that melody off of each other by larger intervals to create more motion; for instance, staying strictly within minor scale, a riff like this

Code:
|------4540
|---235
|023


will be more interesting than something like this:
Code:
|-----22530
|02335


Also, you'll probably not want to stay strictly within major/minor key. Adding off-scale notes for color or using Phrygian/Locrian mode can make a melody much more interesting. Here's a more interesting version of the first riff above:
Code:
|------4541
|---125
|023

The tritone, and especially descending to the major seventh, add a tension to the riff that wasn't present previously. Study your diminished scales, phrygian/locrian mode, and other types of minor scales (melodic minor, harmonic minor, and Hungarian minor are all useful) to find more opportunities to work some "tension notes" into your stuff.
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2018 3:33 pm 
 

What do you think about my meatloaf cover?

https://soundcloud.com/intoinfiniteobsc ... ou-deserve

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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 17, 2018 1:07 pm 
 

Hello

Right now in my band i play both the guitar and sing. We have only rehearsed so far never played live. And i have sang mostly karaoke for fun for years so i havent really known how my voice sounds like. If we ever perform live do you think people would boo us because of the vocals?

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1deGMceZi2A

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0fvOBldYGpN

https://soundcloud.com/intoinfiniteobscurity

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Twisted_Psychology
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2018 3:22 pm 
 

Bands don't really get booed anymore from my experience. Audiences just go outside and smoke during a shitty band these days.
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2018 3:04 pm 
 

Hello

This is a top five of my worst vocal covers while drunk. Tell me what you think?

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0ihu1JrIvZv

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1UZksFwGVNq

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1jXnW0ESPce

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1Ioit0QC2Jq

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1V1DWeGKwCM

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Woutjinho
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PostPosted: Mon May 14, 2018 5:02 pm 
 

Tempting...
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2018 4:13 pm 
 

How do they sound?

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Ebheron
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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2018 4:25 pm 
 

They sound... Alcoholic
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CorpseFister
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PostPosted: Tue May 15, 2018 7:35 pm 
 

I've wondered if you/HellBentForLeather25 were just a troll or actually some odd, awkward sad sack looking for validation from strangers.

This post is good evidence for the former.

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Insin
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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2018 1:39 am 
 

These are beautiful
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2018 1:28 pm 
 

Insin wrote:
These are beautiful


Thanks are you serious?

I also did a judas priest cover today.

And why should i be trolling?


https://vocaroo.com/i/s11QDYjuvK3N

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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2018 6:11 pm 
 

Hello

Im more used to black metal singing so i tried to sing death metal today. How does it sound?

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1a3VJoIjzGq

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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 11, 2018 2:51 pm 
 

Hello

My dream is to go up on a stage and sing to people and get them dragged into the music. But i dont know if i have a good voice or not. What do you think? I have mostly just sang karaoke but i wanna be a lead singer.
I'll post some clips here below

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0NNs9zN19NJ

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0m1M9bpiqvQ

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1TmpEeCiZ5H

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0xG01UoRv9H

https://vocaroo.com/i/s1KtUjqNKnvu

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Element_man
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:21 pm 
 

The first three are fucking hilarious. Sorry. They are outside of your range and your pitch is rough.

OK so assuming that you're genuinely looking for advice or feedback, I'm going to say that as far as singing metal goes, your vocal tone isn't bad. You sound good during certain parts of the Maiden and Priest songs, especially at the beginning when you're more fresh. However if goes downhill after a while and you start sounding tired and you lose control and then start to lose the notes. Listen to what you've recorded and be honest with yourself. You shouldn't need strangers on the internet to tell you this shit.

In short, your tone of voice sounds like it has potential to be pretty good for traditional/power metal but you really need to focus on building your stamina, control and developing your internal ear. Some of this is technical, like developing good breathing habits and keeping a dedicated practice routine. Find a good teacher who can guide you.
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2018 9:04 am 
 

Hello

This is all i created on reaper + guitar pro 5. What do you think about it? I want some feedback.

https://vocaroo.com/i/s0qBkd98UXrp

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CorpseFister
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 16, 2018 9:52 pm 
 

Every post you make is this shit. "Can I sing? How do I sound? Can I sing black metal? Should I be in a band? Waaahhh"

Shut the fuck up and do it, or don't. No musician good or bad got their start by whinging on the internet for validation from strangers.

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The Ardbeg Wizard
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2018 3:18 am 
 

This is ridiculously cringy.

I just made a new riff
Trying to sing Death Metal for the first time
five of my worst vocal covers while drunk/how do they sound?
Should i be a singer?
What do you think about my band?
Hellhammer is a douche/Hello Anyone else like the guys in Mayhem except Hellhammer?

Stop posting every stupid thought that comes up in your mind.
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2018 4:03 am 
 

CorpseFister wrote:
Shut the fuck up and do it, or don't.


Make yor memes come true, dude!
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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2018 3:55 pm 
 

Hello

I am normally a black metal singer but i have always had a wide variety of other music too so i tried to record a regular rock song. Telle me how it sounds i want some feedback?


https://soundcloud.com/simonovhell/rock-song-1

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Slayer1990
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 09, 2018 11:25 am 
 

Please answer i need feedback

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Zodijackyl
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 11, 2018 12:15 am 
 

You should try to write a whole song, and get it in tempo with a drum or click track.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2018 8:06 am 
 

Slayer1990 wrote:
Please answer i need feedback


Fuck, man. You are the whiniest person I've ever seen online.
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