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tangytoby
Metal newbie

Joined: Mon Dec 01, 2014 12:31 am
Posts: 35
Location: United States
PostPosted: Sat Aug 03, 2019 2:31 am 
 

Guitar and Vocal cover of Strength and Honour by Satanic Warmaster

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yrpcfcp
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Fri Nov 27, 2015 9:59 am
Posts: 1
Location: Brazil
PostPosted: Mon Sep 16, 2019 9:42 pm 
 

I am finishing an EP on songs based on the works of the author Thomas Ligotti.

Anyone knows about him?

Here is the opening track

https://tsalal.bandcamp.com/track/the-stars-the-hills

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LordNailling
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Wed Aug 07, 2019 12:55 pm
Posts: 10
Location: United States
PostPosted: Fri Sep 27, 2019 11:59 pm 
 

This is my first album I wrote. Its like a mix between Skeletonwitch, Windir, and some thrash and black metal bands.
At first I was like, I know what I want to side like. But in retrospect I see that I sort of was testing the waters on my niche, but Ive learned toward the black metal elements. Im curious how other people see my Ozark Shaman debut.

Ozark Shaman (Little Rock, Arkansas)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jx2kQhlobyU&t=1438s

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LordNailling
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Wed Aug 07, 2019 12:55 pm
Posts: 10
Location: United States
PostPosted: Sat Sep 28, 2019 12:00 am 
 

yrpcfcp wrote:
I am finishing an EP on songs based on the works of the author Thomas Ligotti.

Anyone knows about him?

Here is the opening track

https://tsalal.bandcamp.com/track/the-stars-the-hills


Sound different, I like it.

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LordNailling
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Wed Aug 07, 2019 12:55 pm
Posts: 10
Location: United States
PostPosted: Sat Sep 28, 2019 12:00 am 
 

This is my first album I wrote. Its like a mix between Skeletonwitch, Windir, and some thrash and black metal bands.
At first I was like, I know what I want to side like. But in retrospect I see that I sort of was testing the waters on my niche, but Ive learned toward the black metal elements. Im curious how other people see my Ozark Shaman debut.

Ozark Shaman (Little Rock, Arkansas)

Youtube: show

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Niklas Sanger
Metal newbie

Joined: Tue Dec 30, 2014 7:17 pm
Posts: 395
Location: United States
PostPosted: Mon Sep 30, 2019 5:46 pm 
 

https://gallowshymn.bandcamp.com/album/ ... ring-storm

This is my full length album that was just released last month, its gotten good feedback so far but I want more neutral criticism of both the production, songwriting, and lyrics/vocal delivery. This is our first album and we recorded most of it ourselves.
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Amber Gray
Metalhead

Joined: Sat Jan 21, 2012 12:30 am
Posts: 627
PostPosted: Thu Oct 03, 2019 2:29 am 
 

my new and strongly resourceful implements of granular synthesis and tape manipulation have lead to this large work of post-industrial/IDM/dub techno/tape music/plunderphonics/downtempo/deconstructed club/sound collage/dub

https://troublesalad.bandcamp.com/album ... 6ht3yU_ExQ
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ShaolinLambKiller
King Asshole

Joined: Fri Dec 07, 2007 6:10 pm
Posts: 13213
Location: United States
PostPosted: Sun Oct 06, 2019 3:43 pm 
 

Niklas Sanger wrote:
https://gallowshymn.bandcamp.com/album/the-gathering-storm

This is my full length album that was just released last month, its gotten good feedback so far but I want more neutral criticism of both the production, songwriting, and lyrics/vocal delivery. This is our first album and we recorded most of it ourselves.



songwriting is awesome I like the songs. the vocals are kinda upfront for this. the drums are good but kinda domintate during rolls then disappear again. basically this would benefit from a master overall that might make all the stringed instruments a bit louder and less mush. for this sort of material I think it needs much more definition. if the guitars were up another 3 notches and the bass apropriate. and a overall more kick and slightly tad more snare. snare is about perfect overall. just a cunt hair more. like more mids to cut. but I like the songwriting and it is interesting overall. but after listening a bit I don't know what I listened to till it gets to the "quiet parts" like it's Primordal or Katatonia. it's vast potiential. and when on the first song ever it kicks into overdrive with the kicks it sounds so fucking vastly fake like Oh our drummer can't play this part so we programmed it. maybe he can, maybe he can't but how it sounds in the mix. the kick is a back ground noise till that moment. but ya'll right some good songs. i want to hear this remixed and mastered.
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ShaolinLambKiller
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Joined: Fri Dec 07, 2007 6:10 pm
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Location: United States
PostPosted: Sun Oct 06, 2019 3:55 pm 
 

Amber Gray wrote:
my new and strongly resourceful implements of granular synthesis and tape manipulation have lead to this large work of post-industrial/IDM/dub techno/tape music/plunderphonics/downtempo/deconstructed club/sound collage/dub

https://troublesalad.bandcamp.com/album ... 6ht3yU_ExQ



bass is peaking out in the most negative way. like if I feel I have to throw off my headphone for just bass at the begining it's a fucking shame and someone not paying attention. why in the first track when obviously the first song has ended at 3:30 you start up a new totally different track. just split it up. honestly next section is not fucking interesting even in all the dub/techno/club/plunderphontics tags you use. it's just barebones basically "i figured how to make this daw work properly with my programming with VST's" if this is your very first stab into it then i applauded you for doing that. but really this first song is 3 different totally songs. I don't need to go any further cause you don't know how to truly bridge one segment into the other without it sounding like a 90's club mix of a pop song.
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Amber Gray
Metalhead

Joined: Sat Jan 21, 2012 12:30 am
Posts: 627
PostPosted: Tue Oct 08, 2019 11:49 pm 
 

and to think it only gets worse from there
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