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MJS71
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Joined: Sun May 24, 2015 10:39 pm
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2021 1:05 pm 
 

Nocturnal_Evil wrote:
Hey everyone,

I've posted here before, but since then my group's made some progress in our musical journey. More specifically, my band released an EP a couple days back, which I was hoping you'd give a listen and some feedback to. The work is a mix of folk-tinged melodeath and atmospheric black metal.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LDSIez6mE6g

Timestamps are in the description. Thanks!


I just listened through it and I am a fan. My one main piece of criticism (as a bassist) is that turning the bass up a bit would make the music feel a little more full and would add some meat to the guitars (which do have a good tone and production on their own). Also vocals would add to the atmosphere. But great songwriting and playing overall!
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Arkhane
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Joined: Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:39 pm
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Location: South Texas
PostPosted: Mon Nov 22, 2021 4:31 pm 
 

Hollowmusic wrote:
Hey everyone, recently i released a single "Praise the Sun" under the name Astora. Its Melodic Death Metal but also slightly influenced by Harakiri For The Sky. I would like some honest critical feedback on the song, and on the actual mix, since im getting closer and closer to finishing recording the whole 2nd LP album.

Here are the links:
Lyrics video:

Bandcamp:
https://astora-metal.bandcamp.com/

Hope you enjoy it, and leave feedback.
Thanks!

The mix really didn't sound bad at all, but I did hear a couple of sour notes created by a possibly out of tune guitar. One of them was specifically at 1:47. I would check your intonation and tuning, and possibly go over those parts again.

Also, kudos for using a Dark Souls theme in your material. I loved that series.
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Meditari
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Joined: Thu Nov 14, 2013 5:12 pm
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2021 4:03 pm 
 

This is my first time trying to make black metal and is the first song I've created in a long time, think there's any potential here? Btw I suck at vocals so there aren't any.
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