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SwedishMetalHead30
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Thu Jan 07, 2021 5:38 pm
Posts: 2
Location: Sweden
PostPosted: Thu Nov 17, 2022 10:20 am 
 

Hi

I tried to record a nice ballad by Judas Priest called Angel.
I tried to experiment a little with my voice.
How does it sound?

https://vocaroo.com/1a7hVicHAkVs

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Neurological Outsourcing
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Wed Jul 29, 2020 10:10 pm
Posts: 19
Location: United States
PostPosted: Sat Nov 19, 2022 10:19 pm 
 

From what I can hear it sounds pretty good. Maybe mix your voice a bit higher and put less reverb on, it's sorta coating the performance. Some of the note and line transitions like 1:10 and 1:33 have an interesting breathy rise to them which may or may not be intentional. The grit at 1:24 is nice.
All in all it sounds like you can sing high without straining, and once you're on a pitch you have no trouble keeping it.
I would also suggest exporting the song louder.

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widow_mine
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Sat Nov 19, 2022 10:28 pm
Posts: 5
PostPosted: Mon Nov 21, 2022 11:16 am 
 

i agree with neurological outsourcing on the mix/reverb notes.
you definitely are nailing the tone and delivery, pitch could be more accurate. keep it up

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coupdebleus
Metal newbie

Joined: Thu Sep 05, 2019 3:11 pm
Posts: 184
PostPosted: Fri Nov 25, 2022 10:19 pm 
 

Your tone comes across slightly nasal, there might be a raised larynx at play. Don’t forget to keep your jaw relaxed and your mouth open, specially on high notes and when going to [i] and [e] sounds, and you should be able to hit a fuller, rounder tone.

You’re on a good path, I liked your interpretation. Keep at it!
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NinosDeMetal
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Wed Dec 07, 2022 12:34 am
Posts: 1
Location: United States
PostPosted: Wed Dec 07, 2022 1:04 am 
 

i think it sounds good
the reverb is slightly strong but overall don't really find it displeasing. keep at it =)

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Eternal Unity
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Joined: Mon Apr 19, 2021 5:29 am
Posts: 199
Location: Israel
PostPosted: Sun Jan 15, 2023 7:26 am 
 

Echo is noticible. Other wise, very cool :)
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Eternal Unity
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Joined: Mon Apr 19, 2021 5:29 am
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Location: Israel
PostPosted: Thu Jan 19, 2023 10:57 pm 
 

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